Originally Posted By: Chris37
Hi Pat,
Your comment was very interesting !
So, I've made some modifications.
To make the middle of the song more orchestral, I've replaced the strumming acoustic guitar by a piano.
I've also added three string instruments : cello, viola and violin. I hope you will enjoy ... Christian


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I think the new instruments do add to a more cinematic feel, but leaving the electric guitars in the mix perpetuates the conflict between the live sound and the more orchestrated cinematic feel.</opinion>

Having said all that.. I don't expect song writers to change their work based on my comments. After you read a lot of reviews here, it becomes evident that the same song in which 80% of the people wouldn't change a thing, there may still be 20% who offer suggestions for improvement... and often the 20% aren't even commenting on the same things.

Your song is your art, and its goal is to offer the world a glimpse of YOUR vision. Our comments say more about our taste than they say about the song writers art.