Hey Kevin,

LOL.... I write lyrics, too. I didn't realise it until you drew my attention to it but the line "in the space of a handful of seconds" has an excellent rhythm.

wwSwwSwwSw

(w = weak stress, S = strong stress)

The poets would call that anapestic trimeter... now I just need to try and remember it smile

Regards,
Noel


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