Gorgeous and meaningful song. Nice vocals.

I suggest you review the break in the song. It stops abruptly in the middle of the phrasing. You can let it play until a natural break. The song is short and extending it a few seconds is ok. Maybe even experiment with fading the instrument at that point rather than having an abrupt stop.

It is a really good song and well done. Enjoyed listening.


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