Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
Gorgeous and meaningful song. Nice vocals.

I suggest you review the break in the song. It stops abruptly in the middle of the phrasing. You can let it play until a natural break. The song is short and extending it a few seconds is ok. Maybe even experiment with fading the instrument at that point rather than having an abrupt stop.

It is a really good song and well done. Enjoyed listening.


Same opinion about the break Robert, otherwhise the song is short but well achieved, nice voice too.
Probably because I am a french people, I am always surprised to see how jesus and lord inspire musicians of this forum.

Cheers
Pascal


No hay banda! There is no band! Il n'est pas de orchestra!
No hay banda! And yet we hear a band !

(David Lynch - Mulholland Drive)