Hi Mattox!

Glad to see the lyrics this time! In addition to making your production more understandable to those who view it, it also helps us to offer our thoughts.

I liked the chord pattern and the way the lead parts worked with it.
I also liked the way the verses kept leading back to your title... very cool!
The ending sounded like it got clipped at some point in the production, but apart from that it was quite enjoyable!

Are you having fun with BIAB so far? Sounds like you are!