Ken,

Nice write on this. Well structured, simple, to the point, tight.

Good arrangement, nice mix.

I like your vocal. It has an "honesty" to it. You bring it down (just a hair) so that it sits in the mix a little more, which will bring your tracks more "into play" - they already sound good, but that would, effectively raise their volume a tad. There seems a little breakup of the vocal on a couple of words, so a 1 dB drop might be just the thing...

Good stuff...

floyd