Originally Posted By: PeterF
Lawrence & Janice
Enjoyed the lyrics and melody.
Top vocal performance by both of you and a very strong arrangement.
The song builds really nicely.
Just really well done.


Thanks Peter for mentioning my harmony!

Janice



Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
HOLY CRAP! This is GREAT! Absolutely inspiring on every level! First of all, the lyrics are amazing... they have the feel of something traditional .. enhanced by your use of somewhat antiquated terminology...

the style itself is also reminiscent of an 1800s era ballad! I experienced shiver rushes the whole time it played, from start to finish!

Janice, this is such a new and wonderful sound for you! It's different from most of what I've heard from you til now , but JEEZ! You both knocked this ball clean out of the park and into the next county!

Right from the beginning with the acoustic guitar I knew this was going to be a favorite... and then the lyrics started flowing... and then the fiddle came in... and then Janice came in... and by the time the drums made their entrance, that just pushed it over the top and clean out of sight!

Great use of dynamics, bringing instruments in and out of the mix to build and release tension... And that distorted bass!

I'm impressed beyond words... I'll be dreaming about this one! It's embedded in my subconscious now! Two enthusiastic thumbs up!

(PS this song needs to go on your GREATEST HITS collection...)


Those are very kind remarks! Lawrence made it easy with such a great write. He didn't mention it but there is a Mark Twain connection to the song.

Thanks again for your support,

Janice

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