Originally Posted By: floyd jane
This is cool stuff to be doing, Pat. You could become famous! Seems like you are "in the right place at the right time" - with the right tools.

my minimal contribution aside, I do think that BIAB is the right tool for the job. You start with a theme and match it up with a style, add a hook (in this case it was the spooky whistle that always played in the 60s sci-fi flicks) and add just enough lyrics to describe the story in a nutshell!


I downloaded and listened to all of these before starting on the project... they really are classics


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And now, Alien Grey!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esnEazQjk6I

Kids could be singing this for the rest of their lives! It could become a Jeopardy question. Or at least a drinking-game dare... "Sing Alien Grey!" HA!

LOL! I like the way you think! And I hope it works out well for Clay

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It does just what it needs to do (like all those classics) and is the perfect length...

Well done!

I thought the length was about right, but after watching the first video, I'll be removing a verse... and probably clean it up a bit for kids.

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(tell Clay that his text screens go away too soon. I was not finished reading any of them before they moved on...) And tell him to make your credit easy to read!!!! You deserve that...

yes, he's heard that from several people already... at the moment he's a talented amateur, and he has a learning curve ahead of him to bump it up a notch. If he's the kind of guy who can take constructive criticism without getting offended, he'll do well. Regarding my credit, I've already told him to ditch it completely or at most make it a small note in the final credits.

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Fun stuff.

floyd

Thanks for the detailed and interesting review... Clay asked me to thank you and everybody else who responded!