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Has It Started?https://soundcloud.com/peterf1957/has-it-startedLyrics and Vocals Leon I played guitars and did some backing vocals. The Band
RealTracks in style: ~518:Bass, Electric, Pop HalfNotes Ev 085 RealTracks in song: 2548:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm FolkSorrow Ev16 090 RealTracks in song: 1680:Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealTracks in song: ~689:Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 085 RealTracks in song: 2537:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModernPopSlow16thsZane Ev16 075 RealTracks in song: 1757:Accordion, Rhythm Pop8ths Ev 085 RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^6-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat Open Has It Started?[b][/b] Is that thunder Or has it started Can we reconcile Or have we parted I rang my therapist She’s on vacation How am I supposed to find Illumination Shine a light On how my life’s unspooling Heaven only knows What the Hell I’m doing Say it’s a holy war But innocents are dying Doesn’t rain here anymore What’s the use of trying I always turned to you For consolation Now you say you’re bored by My adoration Don’t be so quick to
Turn my love aside
The snow doesn’t care
Who’s on the mountain side
You might need a friend
Or a place to hide
The snow doesn’t care
Who’s on the mountain side
Is that thunder Or has it started Hard to believe this is What we wanted The skies are strange with Signs and portents Wish I had the key to Their importance You rely on All that medication Nothing gets you high Not even fornication Get up to face the day What a struggle One day you may decide It’s just not worth the trouble I heard you blamed her For your undoing I think it’s only Yourself that you’re fooling Don’t be so quick to
Turn her love aside
The snow doesn’t care
Who’s on the mountain side
You might need a friend
Or a place to hide
The snow doesn’t care
Who’s on the mountain sideI was twenty one Acting melancholy Drinking way too much And saying life was folly When the darkness comes And it isn’t of your choosing It’s a different game Everybody’s loosing I heard the Devil On the radio last night The razor wire is up The beacons are alight I’ve stopped counting all the ways That we have failed Hear noises on the line And I think I’m being tailed You have forgotten more Than I will ever know One for the road Before we have to go
Don’t be so quick to
Turn love aside
The snow doesn’t care
Who’s on the mountain side
You might need a friend
Or a place to hide
The snow doesn’t care
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Listened to this as it thunders all around us here in S. Carolina this afternoon. Talk about setting the mood...
I like this song a lot. It's a good fit for the vocals and arrangement you created.
Enjoyed it and will be back for more listens.
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Hi Peter,
I thought it had a nice live feel to it, and I liked the way the guitar parts worked with the trax. The lyrics seemed a bit cryptic to me, but that makes them more interesting.
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Hi, Peter !:))
I must say that
I liked this production
both tune, vocals and
mix ! :)) congrats Peter !!
Cheers
Dani
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Great sound on this, Peter. Nice instrumentation, good mix. Your guitar additions are well done.
Leon's rhymes are a standout here...clever. Good vocals, too (though they get a little low late in the song compared to the band)
Enjoyed it.
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Hi Peter,
nice chord progression, arrangement, mix and good
vocals.
The lyrics are very clever.
Your guitar fits perfectly.
An enjoyable listen.
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Good lyrics, good vocals and you're doing well as a backing vocal!
Very nice job.
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Hi Peter,
I thought it had a nice live feel to it, and I liked the way the guitar parts worked with the trax. The lyrics seemed a bit cryptic to me, but that makes them more interesting. Peter, I especially liked the solo. Good job guys. Tom
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Love the lyrics, almost Dylanesque. Interesting song,like the chord progressions, drums, rhyming medication and fornication, what's not to like.
Kenny
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A bit of synchronicity. Glad it enhanced the mood.
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Hey, great delivery Peter.
A really smooth rock feel, excellent lyrics.
This is really up there. I thoroughly enjoyed it, that's for sure.
Thanks for sharing.
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Melody, lyric and arrangement all work really well.
The effects on your voice were almost overwhelming in the quiet intro - almost had some clipping as well. Once the band kicked in the issue was reduced but I do think you could put your voice, almost naked into the mix and it'd sound fantastic.
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A really interesting write!! The progression is very nice. There is a lot of repetition but I didn't get tired of it. There are some really great lyrics. Some parts are funny, some poignant, most cryptic. Very different but very interesting listen! Take care. Greg
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Hi Peter,
I thought it had a nice live feel to it, and I liked the way the guitar parts worked with the trax. The lyrics seemed a bit cryptic to me, but that makes them more interesting. Thanks Pat They were an interesting set of lyrics to work with.
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Hi, Peter !:))
I must say that
I liked this production
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mix ! :)) congrats Peter !!
Cheers
Dani Thanks Dani
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Great sound on this, Peter. Nice instrumentation, good mix. Your guitar additions are well done.
Leon's rhymes are a standout here...clever. Good vocals, too (though they get a little low late in the song compared to the band)
Enjoyed it.
floyd Thanks Floyd Appreciate the comments and will pass on the compliments.
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Hi Peter,
nice chord progression, arrangement, mix and good
vocals.
The lyrics are very clever.
Your guitar fits perfectly.
An enjoyable listen.
Guenter Guenter Thanks - glad you liked the guitar part.
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Good lyrics, good vocals and you're doing well as a backing vocal!
Very nice job. Rob & Ann-Marie Thanks - I try with the backing vocals - it can be hit or miss.
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Great sound and production.
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Listened to this as it thunders all around us here in S. Carolina this afternoon. Talk about setting the mood...
I like this song a lot. It's a good fit for the vocals and arrangement you created.
Enjoyed it and will be back for more listens. We listened to this last night and today I came back for another and some comments...and, yep, thunder is all around the homestead. Like floyd said "nice rhymes" and the mix sounds really good on our monitors. An interesting and effective choice of RT's go well with your playing. It's all happening here...cool vocal, write and arrangement. Enjoyed it! J&B
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