Originally Posted By: floyd jane
"I’m living with the knowledge
That it’s easy to backslide
And slip across that shadow line
Without breaking stride"

Powerful writing, Fred.
Excellent arrangement and mix. Just what this needs. I like an introspective song that is presented in a "on the bright side" package (music). Most writers never do that.

This works on every level. An important message, well told.

floyd


Thanks, Floyd. Yes, sometimes I like to go against the grain of the lyrics with contrasting music.

Fred

Last edited by fgrittner; 06/10/16 06:23 AM.
Fred Grittner
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