Hi Sam! Welcome to the forum!

Man, you just jump right in... your very first post is a song submission!

I liked the way your song started with an unlikely premise for getting back together, then ramped it up to progressively less-likely scenarios. Clearly this song is about a guy who will never EVER forget whatever it is that offended him!

The Marley style really made the song fun to listen to, and I thought the MIDI sax sounded surprisingly sax-like (most MIDI saxes don't sound much like a sax to me at all). The fact that you were able to use a MIDI sax (and therefore control the notes) allowed you to echo your melody in the sax, which I thought added a LOT to the overall impact of the song.

The irony of using a reggae style for this song is that reggae typically creates a very laid-back mood, but the theme of the song was very resolute and not laid back at all... therefore the presence of two conflicting moods served to emphasize the understated and whimsically described conflict between the wills of the two parties in the song. Very interesting.

I thought this was a grand introduction to the forum, and I look forward to hearing more from you!

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/ey71h8ep047758h/AAC12jNM0Hz9Q8zsh5iDeqNHa?dl=0