Originally Posted By: Buttrey
Hi Pat,
Thanks for listening and saying nice things. You hit the nail exactly: I loved the contrast of "happy"-sounding reggae and the unhappy singer, plus the idea of the singer getting progressive farther from reality.

This is my first post but I've done lots of lurking and I've owned BIAB for many years. Truthfully the standards are so high here, I've been intimidated, but I appreciate the kind and constructive people here.

Thanks again,
Sam B.

the bar is indeed set very high here due to having quite a few amazingly talented songwriters present on the forum. But you're certainly no slouch, and I think you have entered the game well above newbie level. You fit right in, and I do hope to hear more from you.

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/ey71h8ep047758h/AAC12jNM0Hz9Q8zsh5iDeqNHa?dl=0