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Noel96 #356250 07/04/16 02:45 PM
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Very cool Noel.
Simple elements and no crowding make for a great arrangement.
A particularly assured vocal performance & the Melodyne harmony work well to keep the up vibe.
Top stuff Noel.
the lyric structure an analysis is a good template for those who struggle to break out of ABA.


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Noel,

This is a truly delightful listen!

The opening is so well done. The combination of chords and the lead that is weaved in - grab the ear right away - immediately had me dancing in my chair... then lead directly into the opening line... hooked!!

Nice how the opening 2 lines in all three verses set up...

"All I want to do
Is to stay home lovin' you"

Well done! REALLY nice how you get "right to the point", too...

That bridge would fit perfectly in Tin Pan Alley.. (especially with "Harlequin and Columbine"... uniquely done!)

The lead guitar sounds like it was custom played for your song. (did you add the harmony notes at the end of that??? - if so, nice job!!)

What a nice touch the echoes are!!! And super job on the harmony vocal... Such confidence in the entire vocal!!! Strong.

The mix is excellent. So good I didn't even think about it the first few listens... that is a testament!

I enjoyed reading your discussion of how you went about creating this. (You are definitely a teacher!)

Top shelf.

floyd


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Originally Posted By: boehm
Hi Noel,

what a nice uplifting song! It made me tapping my feet all the time. Great vocal delivery, nice harmonies.
I especially like the chords of the B part.
The RTs sound like made for the song.
I enjoyed several listens a lot.

Guenter

Hi Guenter,

Thanks for passing through. I appreciate the visit and the feedback.

If you're interested, the bridge starts out in the key of A major. You've probably worked it out already but, in case not, here's the bridge's chord progression...

A major: | IIm7 V7 | I | D major: |IIm7 V7 | I |
E major: | IIm7 V7 | I | II7 | V7sus

Translating this to chords gives...

Bm7 E7 | A | Em7 A7 | D |

F#m7 B7 | E | F#7 | B7sus| (leading to the key of E major)


...IIm-V-I variations always seem to drive a bridge really well.

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Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Great production Noel! Well done!!


Thanks David. It's been a long journey (seriously) for me to get on top of the production aspects.

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Originally Posted By: HearToLearn
This is so beyond cool! Wow! I am SO appreciative that you did this! To see your thoughts and techniques in action verses having to guess at what you did...priceless!

I hear a bit of the beatles, the turtles, and just all around a great song.

........

This is SO my kind of thing. I can't even begin to express my excitement! Thank you!! smile


I agree 100%. All that I can add is that you should post more often.

Two thumbs up!


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Originally Posted By: PaddyG
What a great little song, this theme would have fitted in within any year, 50s to 80s, and works today. Its good, its warm and nostalgic, it’s just plain fun. I expected a megaphone in there any moment.We need more of this in our lives.

Paddy G


Hi Paddy,

I appreciate your taking the time to listen and comment.

I don't know if you've found it with your songwriting but I find that whenever I use AABA form, which is a favourite of mine, the format seems to add a touch of timelessness to the song. I think that this might be because is was such a prevalent form from 1920 to around 1970. Many of the songs that were written during that time and went on to become 'evergreen standards' were in AABA (e.g. Somewhere Over The Rainbow, When You Wish Upon A Star, Yesterday, Let It Be Me, The Great Pretender, etc., etc.).

Thanks again for passing through!
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Noel, you've once again demonstrated you're ability to deliver great quality material.

The lyrics are colourful, the harmony parts work so well, and the great jive feel sits perfectly.

Going back for another (3rd) listen.

Top job (again)

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Originally Posted By: RnAM
Very nice Noel!

Love that steady beat, that country boogie sure works.
The feel and structure of the song makes me think of....
Gilbert O'Sullivan (and I really loved his songs).

Rob


Hey Rob,

Good to see you! Thank you for listening.

It's been a long time since I last heard Gilbert O'Sullivan. Like you, I'm a fan of his music. "Oh Claire" was a favourite of mine for quite a while! I'm heading over to Youtube to have a listen again. Thanks for reminding of him.

All the best to you and Anne-Marie,
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Hello Noel,
great song as always you do.
Super chord progression.

Very well sung.

Sergio



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Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Noel !

I am weak for this kind of
rhythm and tunes and your
newest almost got me daydreamin´
away ! I just love everything
about it and your voice is
better than ever ! My new Noelfav
from now on !:))

Cheers
Dani


Hi there, Dani!

Thank you for coming along and giving my song a run through. Also, thank you for your comment on Soundcloud. You know, this forum just wouldn't be the same without you. You have a kind word and a cheery comment for everyone! It's a real pleasure having you around.

Best wishes for summer!
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Originally Posted By: PeterF
Noel
Song has a lot of character and very catchy. Very interesting write up of how you composed the song.
Very enjoyable all round.


Hi Peter,

Thank you for taking time to listen. Now if only I could be as productive as you and Leon! Your two are writing machines!

All the best,
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Originally Posted By: 90 dB
Very nice Noel. Enjoyed that a lot.

Regards,

Bob


Thanks Bob. It's always good to see you visiting. I don't have your flair and creativity yet... maybe one day if I just keep on chipping away at it!

All the best,
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Noel,

This is a truly delightful listen!

The opening is so well done. The combination of chords and the lead that is weaved in - grab the ear right away - immediately had me dancing in my chair... then lead directly into the opening line... hooked!!

Nice how the opening 2 lines in all three verses set up...

"All I want to do
Is to stay home lovin' you"

Well done! REALLY nice how you get "right to the point", too...

That bridge would fit perfectly in Tin Pan Alley.. (especially with "Harlequin and Columbine"... uniquely done!)

The lead guitar sounds like it was custom played for your song. (did you add the harmony notes at the end of that??? - if so, nice job!!)

What a nice touch the echoes are!!! And super job on the harmony vocal... Such confidence in the entire vocal!!! Strong.

The mix is excellent. So good I didn't even think about it the first few listens... that is a testament!

I enjoyed reading your discussion of how you went about creating this. (You are definitely a teacher!)

Top shelf.

floyd



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Originally Posted By: tommyad
Noel, With each new submission your vocal performance exceeds the last one. Really well sung. This again has that great uplifting feeling that you are so accomplished at achieving. The mix is very clear. I enjoyed the intertwined harmony near the end. Thanks for the corresponding pdf. I am sure there is much to learned there. A great song! Tom


Hey Tom!

I appreciate the comments. Vocals and I have taken a few years to get to know one another! To borrow a song title and use it out of context, it's been a "Long and Winding Road" kind of journey learning how to sing so that people don't wince.

Thanks for commenting on the mix, too. As I've said a number of times over the years, mixing always challenges me! I find that as I attempt to home in on that perfect final sound, it becomes more and more elusive. This happens with every song, time and time again! Oscar Hammerstein best described what mixing is like for me when he said, "How do you hold a moonbeam in your hand?" (Sound Of Music's, 'Maria') I'm still trying to catch it smile

Always good to see you.

Thank you again,
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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Wonderful feel-good tune!! Reminds me of McCartney. Melodically, it works perfectly-constant motion and perfect resolution. Instrumentation and mix are wonderful. This is a gem!! Take care. Greg


Thanks, Greg. I appreciate the smile you brought my way!

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Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
Originally Posted By: HearToLearn
This is so beyond cool! Wow! I am SO appreciative that you did this! To see your thoughts and techniques in action verses having to guess at what you did...priceless!

I hear a bit of the beatles, the turtles, and just all around a great song.

I will comment more after the weekend when I can sit down and read all of the notes!

This is SO my kind of thing. I can't even begin to express my excitement! Thank you!! smile


My thoughts exactly. I don't know where to begin so I'll start where this will end - Loved it from start to finish.


Hey Charlie!

It's always a pleasure to see you. I hope things are travelling along on smooth roads for you. Thanks for dropping by and I'm glad that the document is to your liking.

All the best,
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Thanks Noel. It's been an interesting read. Very thorough. It is somewhat similar to what I've done in the past but your method is better than my simple way.


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Noel,

as I listened through this song, it occurred to me I was smiling... then it occurred to me that ALL of your songs have that effect on me! Whatever magical ingredient inspires joy, you seem to know how to inject it into your songs!

These lyrics are really clever on so many levels, and I know its because of all the time you've invested in the art of effective lyric writing. (It's paying off in a big way!) I especially like the line
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"If you were a season I know you'd be summer"


Another recurring theme in your work (as opposed to so many other forum songs) is that other songs sound like they'd be something I might hear in a club, whereas your songs consistently sound like something I'd hear in a Broadway production or Hollywood musical... maybe even a "chick flick". Is that on purpose, or has it just worked out that way?

I also note that you've provided a write-up of how you developed the song! Thanks for that! You know I always like to learn from the masters!

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Originally Posted By: rsdean
Noel,

You've got the perfect "summer song" here - really loved the tune and your vocal was great. Nice touch on the process as well. smile

Bob


Thanks Bob. I appreciate the visit and the comment.


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Originally Posted By: gruverider
Great composition and production! I love the upbeat vibe and your lyrics are joyful and well crafted.

much enjoyed!


Hey Lawrence.

Good to see you. Thanks for listening.

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