Hi Joanne,

my comments on the first song have disappeared, don't know how. I told you that it's a good start on your journey and that I liked it.
Former Lovers is nice, too. I understand your pondering about the chorus. It doesn't come naturally. The break in front of it makes me feel you don't know what to do next.
You should rethink it.
Enjoyable listen though.

Guenter