Hi Eric,

Very nice composition, and I always enjoy your signature tone and smooth playing style.

There's something about your playing that drives me nuts though... To me your guitar parts sound like real tracks before they're tweaked... well played but with the occasional note that's not necessarily the BEST note for the chord.

I always feel like there a randomness to your notes which need tweaked just a little to line up with the chord changes. In my opinion, doing so would make a big difference in the polish.

Some passages are just BRILLIANT... downright inspired... if you took the time to tweak the whole guitar passage until it matched the song flawlessly either chordally or scalically, your songs would be head and shoulders above anything else on the forum.

They're already good.. but why settle for good when they could be great?
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