Hi Paddy,
There are some hard hitting lyrics in your song though it sounds quite mellow on first impression :

So drive your fancy car while you roll the dice //play stakes high /skate around thin ice.
Keep your lady friend in jewels and mink coat
While the bailiff and the judge got a hand on your throat

Your feelings on the song`s subject are well expressed and your voice is very clear - I`ve enjoyed my several listens!

Robert