Swanny - now that I have listened to this tracks several times in a row...

1. Great music, great blues
2. Great lyrics - very powerful

Personally, I don't believe the two fit together. NOI

I think you need to concentrate on what you are trying to say lyrically - this seems like a grovelling song to me. I don't think it would ever bring a woman back or even get her to wait for you. Particularly since you did the leaving. Frankly, after listening to this I don't think she could even be bothered to shoot you in the head and put you out of your misery.

Of course, I am not a woman...


Follow That Dream

Sam
Karaoke King

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Turning that corner again - I have to keep following that dream, no matter what