Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
Hi Greg,

good to hear a new tune from you!
I liked a lot about this song... some interesting rhymes (I especially liked "descartes" + "heart"

If your goal was to create a mood, you hit a home run! Very relaxing. The flute, background vocals and general instrumentation of the song really evoke nostalgic memories from Bacharach songs from the 60s and 70s.

I agree with Alyn the ending seemed a bit abrupt. You can't end a mellow mood suddenly. You have to "ease out"

VERY easy song to listen to! Addicting, even!


Thanks Pat. This song just started with the lyric and music to "she puts me in a Summer mood" on a Friday afternoon at work (creating while getting paid, since I can't get paid to create). It sort of took on a life of its own from there with a few minutes with BIAB (I love this program!). You're right about the ending-gotta fix that. The BGs are definitely from the 60's (Bacharach, 5th dimension, or something). I tried to harmonize with the melody in a standard way but it didn't work to well so I just played with it. Thanks for the careful listen and kind comments! Take care. Greg