Alyn.

This is absolutely beautiful!

The lyric is heartbreaking.

"this is the last time I tell you I love you" ... What an opening line!!!

"don't you dare follow me as I walk out the door out your life" ... Just as strong as the opener!!!

"I wont look back as the sky starts to fall I wont cry" ... Oh...wow..nice...


The melody (and accompanying chords) is absolutely STUNNING. Gorgeous with a capital G. Like something McCartney would come up with. With a little help from Lennon. (in fact, I was wishing there was some of that typical below-the-melody harmony that they used to do).

This is a song I wish I had written.

Damn! This is good! I love it. Can't stop listening to it...

Love your vocal on this. Cool production.

Big Standing O, buddy.

floyd