Yes bringing up the vocals and thinning out the backing tracks would put this excellent song over the top for me.

You have a very good voice so put it on the top.

This is an excellent song that just needs a little polish IMHO.


OK, a random thought;
Why does toilet paper need a commercial? Who's not buying it?

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