Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Fred,

Excellent job of capturing the sound/feel/write of the style and era.

This is an excellent write. (Not a style that I ever spent a lot of time listen to - was never a "folk" fan). Particularly good job of "sticking the landing" - hitting your hook - at the end of EACH verse...

"She pulled her hair she pulled her sleeve
She pulled the final string
“I’m to wed the miller’s son
Come the Early Spring”

.... like that!

floyd


Thanks, Floyd!

Fred


Fred Grittner
2020 iMac, Sequoia 15.5, Logic Pro
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