Robert,

You have a real talent for this style of folk song.
You have created a nice flowing vocal rhythm in the chorus with good use of harmonies.

The lyrics are also wonderful and very original..

"scheming havoc in telepathy
to dare the stares on city streets"

"my past tied to your future
on the day our twined balloons
sailed into the blue"

Another great song.
Excellent job.
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