Originally Posted By: receder
Robert,

You have a real talent for this style of folk song.
You have created a nice flowing vocal rhythm in the chorus with good use of harmonies.

The lyrics are also wonderful and very original..

"scheming havoc in telepathy
to dare the stares on city streets"

"my past tied to your future
on the day our twined balloons
sailed into the blue"

Another great song.
Excellent job.
Rec


Rec,

Thank you!
I grew up listening mostly to English folk and still lean toward those very simple melodies.
In writing the lyrics I hoped that if the folks who commissioned the nice bench were to hear the song they would find them a good fit.


Robert