Originally Posted By: floyd jane
"on the day our twined balloons
sailed into the blue"

I really like that, Robert.

You do this style so well. True Folk music. Poetically written (as it should be).

Did you play the recorder on this? (it fits so well).

Hope you don't mind me saying... I thought the piano was too busy - and, actually, thought the song was a bit faster tempo than it should be. Your memo says 126. The piano RT was originally 100. I wondered how it might sound at that tempo (meaning the song at 100). Give those words time to sink in.... Though, I might be wrong.

I like what you do.

Floyd did it again!! He always beats me to the punch. Very nice song. Like him, I think the piano sounds somewhat intrusive. I'm not sure about the tempo but the piano makes it feel rushed. Really love the song and the vocal. Take care. Greg

floyd