Hi guys.

If you make it through this song, I'd like your opinion(s) about the hook phrase at the end. Should I remove that last one? Is twice too cheesy to your ear(s)?

All other opinions are welcome, also. Thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/andyandersonmusic/forever-is-a-long-long-time

Anchor.sty (I changed all the instruments)
518 Elec Bass
494 Trumpet
NashivlleEven16^20SideStck,HHat RDs
2503 Piano Acoustic Held
2024 Piano Acoustic Rhythm CountryJohn Ev 85
2200 Guitar Nylon background
In Gb, 84 bpm


Andy

BIAB 2017 Ultra
Windows 8 and 10
Scarlet 18i8
Reaper and Mixpad