Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Fred,

The write did a good job of capturing that Hank Williams vibe - very authentic...

The backing is good. I do think you need to mix this a bit more like a rock song - having the vocal "tuck in" the mix some. It's in that good, Country "up front" place, but for this, I think it would work better not quite so up front. The drums are mixed well. The guitar solo, too. It might just be that it needs the piano and rhythm guitar to have a bit more punch - louder, more of the up-frontness (a new made-up word) sound... especially the piano - it is mixed really low - piano is a percussion instrument...it should come across as such (one of my soapbox issues).

A very catchy song. Well sung.

fj


Thanks again, Floyd, for your input. Duly noted.

Fred

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