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another wee song. https://soundcloud.com/user-colly/strayBALADAP.STY. Country Ballad w/ Piano All RealTracks. Quintet. Tempo=65 (55-100) RD: NashvilleEven16^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride RT366: Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065 , Dow Tomlin RT1725: Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm CountryBalladJohn Ev 065 68: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 065 , Jason Roller RT367: Guitar, Electric, Background Dreamy Ev 065 , Darin Favorite Memo: Relaxed country ballad with acoustic Piano. Other RealTracks include acoustic and electric guitars, electric Bass and Nashville RealDrums. T=55-100 ExamplesMandolin Rain, Just One Look TEMPO 65 such a lonely time, its the only time, that I've really missed you. when we said goodbye, that little white lie, I was crying over you. chorus when you went away, left me there that day, then I wondered why, why I didn't try, broke my heart in two, when you said were through, you just walked away, on that rainy day, left me all alone, why ill never know did I ...stray. instrumental if there could only be, one more time for me, then I would hold you in my arms, I would thank the gods above for your tender love, and what you mean to me. when you went away, left me there that day, then I wondered why, why I didn't try, broke my heart in two, when you said were through, you just walked away, on that rainy day, left me all alone, why ill never know did I ...stray.
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Great song Colly,
I really enjoyed this from start to finish.
Very impressive vocal, and excellent choice of tracks.
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Thanks videotrack
I am really impressed what we can do with biab .
I listen to all the tracks posted. But I don't comment all the time.
If you all remember I am new ,more than all things to a forum.
so I watch my p and qs so to speak.
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Colly,
There`s a 50`s feel to this enjoyable ballad.Your vocal sounds good and I liked the arrangement -particularly the strings coming in. Nice one!
Robert
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Colly
Nice classic rock sound with a top quality vocal.
Just a small suggestion for what it's worth the 2nd instrumental with the strings is more defined as an instrumental whereas the first one has a nice sounding guitar but it sounds a bit far back and a bit like the backing track to me(which you may have intended).
Anyway nice song and lyric.
Peter
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Thanks Robert and peter.
Peter yes your spot on had a listen on sound cloud and it does sound like
just backing.
Back to the workshop.
Thanks again
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Excellent tune. I agree this reminded me of the songs from the 50's. Has a definitel DOP-[*****] feel to it
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Sounds like you're a quick learner colly!
The only improvements I could suggest would be the inclusion of a hook and a more clearly defined melody in the break sections.
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Thanks Scott and mglinert for your comments.
Scott I did not get what ( DOP-[*****] feel to it) means just me !.
Thanks Again
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An incredible retro production on a dead-on 50s sounding retro hit. High quality stuff.
You did some unexpected things towards the end that added a brilliant twist to the genre. Pretty amazing man.
Great job.
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Colly, good work! Great job on the vocals and mix! Thank, Torrey
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Thanks David and Torrey
For your comments .
I have been doing a bit of tweaking with this one.
As I did feel the middle instrumental a bit hum drum....
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Very pretty song!! Brings back memories of a wonderful era. Great vocals and production. Liked the strings at the end. Very enjoyable!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks for your comments Greg.
yea It was a wonderful era.
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Colly - I'm really enjoying listening to this song! This is our "Hot Forum Topic" for today. Keep 'em coming!
Callie Marketing Representative PG Music Inc.
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Callie
Thanks
This is our "Hot Forum Topic" for today.
I AM CHUFFED..
Thank you
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Hi colly,
Nice work! You've composed and produced an excellent work in the style of the 50s. I enjoyed listening.
Regards, Noel
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Colly,
There`s a 50`s feel to this enjoyable ballad.Your vocal sounds good and I liked the arrangement -particularly the strings coming in. Nice one!
Robert +1! Very cool fifties vibe.
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