Originally Posted By: rsdean
Charlie,

Very nice! Love the feel of this one - the banjo is also a great addition. Cool vocal and mix as well.

Bob


Thanks Bob. This is the first 'new' song I've written in quite a while. Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Charlie,

This is SUPERB!

A very interesting opening. The bass and brush made me think you might be doing a Tom-Waits-thing...and then it wasn't...the addition of banjo and chord piano was excellent. And the underlying synth, too...

The mix is excellent. The vocal sits perfectly.

The chord progression has a Jimmy Webb (Glen Campbell) feel to it.

A stellar write! When I first looked at the lyric, I wondered how this was going to work. Boy! did it! One of the best of the forum, I think - and that's some stiff competition.

You've talked a lot lately about "doing it right once". This fits the bill. But, boy! I hope you do it many times over...

This. Is. Excellent.

floyd



Wow Floyd. Thank you so very much. I had no idea or hope of such a positive review from anyone on the forum. It's so encouraging because this song is a new write completely. I can't think of any other song I've posted that wasn't either a re-write of an old tune or simply upgraded remake using BIAB. I truly appreciate your comments. Thanks.

Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Charlie !:))


This is just great music !
I liked everything about it !
this must be one of your
absolute best !:))

Happy New Year !

Cheers
Dani


Dani, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've really enjoyed your new song too. Always good to hear from you.

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Charlie
Really good mix of instruments - the brushes and the banjo really gell.
Excellent mix and a nicely written lyric.
Top quality all round.

Peter


Thanks Peter. I appreciate you taking time to listen and comment. The banjo really caught my ear too.

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