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Critiques accepted



I thought the instrumental track sounded pretty good. the vox melody sounded ok to me also. You are going to have to change the lyrics, though -- every single rhyme was that long "o" sound.

First verse: go, hello, go, go

second verse: go, ago, show, go

bridge: outgrow, go

verse: ago, show, glow

Just an opinion.

Kevin

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