David,

You've done a really great job here... I've read through each of the posts above and you deserve every accolade that's come your way.

These lyrics and their development are outstanding. The way that you have used verse two as the generator that lights up the meaning of the words and showcases their emotional power is outstanding. I cannot believe how quickly 5 minutes sped by. I was completely engaged from start to end.

You've created something special with this one.

Regards,
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2025