Cool song. Appropriate for the 2 yr old. I'll bet she likes it.

Some observations.... I like the tracks you used. The piano track sounded good.

One thing got my immediate attention.... where you hit the first word "shock" there was a brief pause of dead silence. That was a bit of a shock to me. What you want to do there is provide some level of continuity. It's fine to stop in the song, but.... have a reverb in the production line so that while the music stops, the natural decay continues. While barely perceptible, it's what we're expecting to hear. If you hear a live band and they do a "cymbal grab stop", there's natural room reverb that carries you through the stop. You should try to emulate that as well. A very short and low level small room reverb will work nicely and not be overly apparent in short stops like that.

I forget which song of mine it is now, but I do have one stop in it with a reverb carry though. The stop is effective with out sounding to abrupt and final with dead silence in it.

That's my opinion and I'm sticking to it. cool

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