Welcome Daniel.

Your control of BIAB in such a short time is remarkable!

Lovely changes on your tune. Really pretty.

I had no issues with the mix, but I'm listening on headphones and can't turn it up just now. The suggestion about widening the stereo image might be worth trying.

From an arrangement standpoint, I would have liked to have heard more of the melody. I think it was in the guitar line, but the trumpet had some, and then, well, where did it go? I have this mental image of a Dixieland band dropping in on a guitar & piano trio rehearsal, and just starting to wail (gently). As odd as that probably sounds, in your song, it actually works. You have a theme that is picked up by instrument after instrument.

Just, when it's all over, I would like to know what the melody was. It could be great.

Please do not be disappointed by my comments. I don't say much unless I see a lot in a song. And the Brazilian genre is my favorite.

Looking forward to more of your work.


BIAB 2025 Win Audiophile. Software: Studio One 7 Pro, Swam horns, Acoustica-7, Notion 6, Song Master Pro, Win 11 Home. Hardware: Intel i9, 32 Gb; Roland Integra-7, Presonus 192 & Faderport 8, Royer 121, Adam Sub8 & Neumann 120 monitors.