Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert

Good catchy song - nice chorus. Some nice dynamics as the song develops.

Peter


Thanks for that, Peter. I tried to change things up between chorus & verses - glad it worked.

Robert

Originally Posted By: Joe -PG Music
Hi Robertkc, Great job on this! Really dig the harmonica it adds flavor to the whole song. Well done! smile


Hi Joe,
Harmonica was the first instrument I played and I always carried a couple when travelling so it was a good fit for this song. Thanks for your kind comments.

Robert

Originally Posted By: RichMac
Enjoyed that Robert especially the boy with sparrow eyes. Cheers.


Thank you!
Yeah,I like that line too- lots of cliches in the lyrics on this song, but that one`s original.

Robert

Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
I saw this one yesterday, was logged into soundcloud and the upload showed up on my stream. Great song, love the lyrics and especially the strong hook in the chorus.


Dave,
Thanks for your listen and comments here and on SoundCloud -The chorus "hook" on this might be the only really catchy one I`ve written!

Robert