Originally Posted By: Andy A - USA
Thanks for the comments. Greatly appreciate you taking time to listen and drop a note

I'll look at the verses again Noel, I doubt im making that kind of a change. That's a huge undertaking and can derail it all. It plays welll, i get a lot of questions and occasionally some will quietly say they also ran a child over. And people will line up to coyly ask it is was me.

these is so much personal emotion and personal demons, no outsider would know about.

I want it in1st person. It is a personal song.


Hi Andy,

The above are only thoughts, nothing more.

Before posting, I tossed the thought "saying nothing versus saying something" around in my mind a great deal. Then I came back to your comment that you encouraged thoughts and suggestions. Because of this, in the end, I decided that it's better to say something and let you choose whether it's useful or not, or valid or not. At the end of the day, any song that a songwriter writes only ever has to meet the expectations of the songwriter. When that's accomplished, the song can be considered successful. (That's my philosophy at least.)

All the best,
Noel


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