Your voice is incredibly authentic sounding - Really, really strong

I think it makes the song; I was there with you ever line!

The only comment I have is the overall length of the song. If I were cowriting with you, I would find some way to drop the first 2 verses. Its important to state your "tag" early on, so that would be my focus for a combination of V1 and V2, but the rest makes the song longer than it needs to be

Anyway - I think you have something really excellent in your delivery, and an excellent set of lyrics - nice one


BIAB user since Feb 2017
Songwriter for far too long