I removed the 1st verse just to see if that served the song better. It shortened the song by 40 seconds, so good deal there. Just over 4 mins.

Without that verse, it kinda just jumps in, but that might be just to my ear because I am used to hearing the original verse in there.

Also, I changed the title because of that. I'd not named it "The Little Boy" previously, though the obvious title, because I didn't want to give hints about the song's story.

Opinions and suggestions and thoughts are welcomed. Be as honest as you like. No offense taken. Thanks, folks.

www.soundcloud.com/andyandersonmusic/the-little-boy


Andy

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