Originally Posted By: 44kfl

desire the clouds we passed through
to the impossible blue

I really like your lyric style, the phrasing, the repeating of words
this has a beautiful flow, the images

sounds great

Kenny


Thanks, Kenny.
I enjoyed finding that repeating words from one line to the next helped the flow of the song... it also gave me an easy form to work with.

Robert

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert
Nice evocative song.

Peetr


Thanks for your listen, Peter!