Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Tom,
Terrific song! My favourite of yours to date.
I`ve just spent the afternoon with a 93 yr old friend who`s full of cool stories about all he`s packed into his "line"... you`ve really captured something essential here.

Robert
His "line". I like that. Thanks Robert, glad you came by. Tom
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Tom,

An excellent write. A really clever idea for a write. The thing that struck me most about it (the writing) was the strength of the verses - and how you advanced the thought in the second verse. Strong.

Nice arrangement. Excellent mix. The DoD drums are nice. Another strong vocal. The harmonies are so well done that they almost slip by "unnoticed" (yet add so much). Nice guitar work - tasty fills. Nice ending.

More and more, your songs stick in my head long after I hear them - in a listen or two.

Another top-notch-er.

fj
floyd, I read that line "the dash" somewhere in an article about music producers. Then a few weeks later I saw it again in an interview with Dr J the basketball great. I thought I don't think I've ever heard a song about that. That was the inspiration. It dropped in my lap out of nowhere and then was dropped again from a very different source. It was like they were saying, You didn't get it the first time dummy now listen up! Thanks for the fine review. Tom