Thank you all, I appreciate all the kind comments. It may surprise you but I tend to agree with you. I posted this late last night, and after listening to it this morning, I have decided to take this one back to the studio. I will leave this version up on the forum, for those that choose to listen, but in the end I am not satisfied with it. The lyrics tell one story but the music tells it differently. There was also some harshness in the vocal that I want to address. Sometimes, when you spend Quite a long time with a tune, you lose your objectivity, and you do things just to get it done. I think I should have left it alone for a few days and then came back to it. Thanks again.