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Tom,
Terrific song! My favourite of yours to date.
I`ve just spent the afternoon with a 93 yr old friend who`s full of cool stories about all he`s packed into his "line"... you`ve really captured something essential here.
Robert His "line". I like that. Thanks Robert, glad you came by. Tom Tom,
An excellent write. A really clever idea for a write. The thing that struck me most about it (the writing) was the strength of the verses - and how you advanced the thought in the second verse. Strong.
Nice arrangement. Excellent mix. The DoD drums are nice. Another strong vocal. The harmonies are so well done that they almost slip by "unnoticed" (yet add so much). Nice guitar work - tasty fills. Nice ending.
More and more, your songs stick in my head long after I hear them - in a listen or two.
Another top-notch-er.
fj floyd, I read that line "the dash" somewhere in an article about music producers. Then a few weeks later I saw it again in an interview with Dr J the basketball great. I thought I don't think I've ever heard a song about that. That was the inspiration. It dropped in my lap out of nowhere and then was dropped again from a very different source. It was like they were saying, You didn't get it the first time dummy now listen up! Thanks for the fine review. Tom
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Back again. Went on a longish bike ride this morning and couldn't get this tune outa my head. It's an inspired write and yields an inspirational message. Bet this would hit the top of the soundclick charts in a heart beat.
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Wow that just blew me away.. Great recording , lyrical content and musicianship ...Your voice kinda has a Charlie Daniels taste to it....
oh did I mention some very nice kick butt geetar Mojo
Dawg it !!!!
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Tom,
WOW! This is GREAT! I really enjoyed it. The mix, vocals, guitar... Everything is very polished. Outstanding!
A fine write.
Greg Greg, Thanks for the nice words. I appreciate it. Tom Tom
You never disappoint - fabulous song, wonderfully arranged, melodic, and a nice set of lyrics.
Great stuff.
Peter Peter, thanks for giving it a spin. Tom
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Great write! I love the space you crate in the soundstage. It's quite remarkable.
Another hit!
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Great Tom! Everything about this song is really special... Love the lyric and delivery - outstanding production as well.
Bob
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Such a great write, arrangement, mix, performance and production. Another Tom Adams song... Really enjoyed this. Lyrically one of best.
Charlie
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It's not the dash that counts, it's the quality of this song  And it's a high level as always! Rob and Anne-Marie Thanks guys. Tom Hi Tom.
Now that is one extremely sophisticated piece of arranging. And then, just when you think you've heard it all, you're left with that wonderful unresolved ending. Any professional producer would be proud of work like that.
On top of all that, it's such a brilliant song.
This simply has to be some of your best work to date.
ROG. ROG said it so well, you make the sounds your own very Pro, very good Enjoyed Kenny Thank you Kenny, Tom
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Hello, Tom
Very catchy and very pop!
The melody and the chord progression are the royal road of the pops.
Vocals and Guitars are superb.
The eighth notes of Bass engraved throughout the music are very pleasant.
The unresolved ending chord is also wonderful.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Shigeki, Thank you for the very nice review. Tom
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I love how you turn a phrase.
Also, a very unique look at the dash on a tombstone. So often we look and think about the two dates but the story lies in the dash. Glad you saw that and wrote about it. A simple dash that encapsulates one's life and everything in it.
Good job on the production. Cool idea to use a minor as the last unfinished chord.
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Great work Tom! This one has some of the best sound (production) that I've heard on this forum. So clean! By the way the song was great too. Thanks, Torrey. Thanks for stopping by Torrey, Tom "It’s the dash that counts that’s the only thing that’s real."
It's the most profound of punctuation marks. We've walked through many an old family cemetery that we often find long since abandoned in forests and pondered what that dash might represent for those that lived out there lives there.
And speaking of profound you again show how a powerful, perhaps even spiritual, concept can be distilled down to relatively few finely crafted words.
Then surround the write with your trademark playing and vocals and production value and voila another Tommyad tune worthy of many listens.
Outstanding!
J&B Janice & Bud, At one point I lived in a house that had a very large graveyard behind it. It was a place that we often walked and sat in at night. I hadn't thought about that time in years until I started this song, then it all came flooding back. Thanks for the thoughtful comments. Tom
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Hi Tommy,
Every time we think you've done your best work yet, you come along with a new one and prove us wrong.
Other than the original lyric (way cool!), what jumped out at us is the arrangement and mix - about as good as it gets. You have a special talent with the technical side that most of us would like to have.
Going to the 6-minor chord for the ending always leaves the song with a resolution that leaves the listener wanting to come back for the next some - a tasteful teaser.
I guess we better wrap this up before we bankrupt the English language of its best superlatives. This is as good as it gets outside of Nashville (maybe better than a lot of songs out of Nashville).
Wishing you the very best,
Alan & Di
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Another great song Tom, I love this arrangement and the ending was a great touch. bravo!
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I thoroughly enjoyed listening to this one! In fact, your entire SoundCloud playlist just became my "soundtrack" for the day! This is today's Hot Forum Topic! So... no more songs about punctuation? What about a song about a font? Helvetica even has its own documentary!
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Awesome. My hat is off to you sir.
Stellar lyrics. GREAT concept. Brilliant.
Simply love it from start to finish.
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Great song from a great concept! Inspiration is all around us if we keep our eyes, ears, and hearts open to it. From there, taking action is just as, if not more important. All the way around, great job!
Chad (Hope that makes it easier)
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Wow that just blew me away.. Great recording , lyrical content and musicianship ...Your voice kinda has a Charlie Daniels taste to it....
oh did I mention some very nice kick butt geetar Mojo
Dawg it !!!! Mark, glad you liked it. Tom Great write! I love the space you crate in the soundstage. It's quite remarkable.
Another hit! Lawrence, I'm always glad to see you around here. Thanks for coming by. Tom
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Great Tom! Everything about this song is really special... Love the lyric and delivery - outstanding production as well.
Bob Hey Bob, Glad you liked it. Thanks, Tom
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Tom,
Great song! Great production, and I always enjoy your vocals. Strong message, well written. One of your best!
Steve
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Such a great write, arrangement, mix, performance and production. Another Tom Adams song... Really enjoyed this. Lyrically one of best.
Charlie Thanks Charlie. I always look forward to your comments. Tom I love how you turn a phrase.
Also, a very unique look at the dash on a tombstone. So often we look and think about the two dates but the story lies in the dash. Glad you saw that and wrote about it. A simple dash that encapsulates one's life and everything in it.
Good job on the production. Cool idea to use a minor as the last unfinished chord. Herb, Thanks, I do appreciate it. So glad you liked it. Tom
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