Jamie,
I enjoyed this song ( would be nice to see the lyrics).I remember your first post here- that was a very good song too.
Your vocal and harmonies are fine ( nice ending!) and instruments well chosen.
Sticking with the rather steep learning curve on self production is fun ... and sometimes I just have to take a break go back to the notepad and guitar and remember why I started.
I hope you`ll keep bringing your songs here.

Robert