Hi Guys,

Very nice song! Cool lyric and the lead guitar break was terrific! And the quiet part (vocal & acoustic guitar only) immediately following it.

We have 2 comments, if you don't mind:

1. Perhaps a small rewrite of this line to avoid using "missed" almost back-to-back: If I’d missed this moment in my life, I would have missed the time we shared. Our suggestion: If I’d missed this moment in my life, I wouldn't have had this time we shared. Just a thought FWIW.

2. perhaps less reverb on the entire recording. To our ears, it somewhat took away from the crispness of your vocals and slightly muddled the instrumental tracks.

Regardless of those two observations, we think you have a really nice song and a good delivery of the lyric. We enjoyed our listen! wishing you the very best,

Alan & Di

PS: Our observations are just our thoughts, keep or sweep as you see fit!


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