IMHO, the vocals need attention to EQ and compression.
They should stand out and be clear.Use EQ to define them, then Compression to create the focus.

If you need to adjust the EQ on other tracks to accommodate this, do it.
Then re-evaluate.
Like I said; this is just my impression/opinion on first listen. The vocals need their space, and definition.



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