For a so-called newbie you did one fantastic job on this your first song!

First, thank you for honoring our heroes. Your lyrics are fantastic!

Second the backing tracks on this are outstanding, especially considering this is your first attempt. I would replace that midi guitar with a real guitar but what would you expect from a guitarist

To nit-pick I thought your voice did strain in a couple of parts so maybe changing keys (it’s very easy with midi) would help.

Overall I give you an A rating, i.e. great job.


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