Hi Riccled!

I haven't watched the forum very faithfully for the past year or so, so I'm not sure whether I've heard anything of yours before or not.

All in all I like the chord progression and the way you've combined the instruments. To me your vocals don't sound like they occupy the same sonic space as the rest of the song... but that may be a conscious decision on your part to make them stand out.

And please don't hear this as a criticism.. I'm only mentioning it in case it applies to others besides me... but I've reached an age where I have a hard time making out the syllables in song lyrics, so I find it very helpful to see the lyrics written out.

I like the fact that you played the solos. It's always cool to hear the artist's personal touch

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/ey71h8ep047758h/AAC12jNM0Hz9Q8zsh5iDeqNHa?dl=0