|
Log in to post
|
Print Thread |
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,961
Veteran
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,961 |
Cool tune Floyd. Awesome vocal and lyric. Loved the story in the lyric. Very wise words from the dad to the son..
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jul 2015
Posts: 5,468
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Jul 2015
Posts: 5,468 |
Floyd, as I was listening to another great song from you, it dawned on me what sets you apart from a lot others singer/song writers posting material. You have a tremendous gift for vocal phrasing in your lyrics. Never too much/never too little! Everything always just fits right in the pocket! It's noticed and appreciated! Take care, Torrey
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 728
Journeyman
|
|
Journeyman
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 728 |
Lots of great lyrics in this one. Very well produced as usual and some very nice vocals.
Enjoyed it,
Bob
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
These are probably some of my favourite lyrcis written in the showcase so far. Amazing job. <3 Thanks, Ember! That certainly brought a smile to my face.... Right from the first moment - this tune is infectious! That guitar riff just makes me feel energetic. I really enjoy the lyrics on this too - they do a great job of painting a vivid story. Thanks for sharing Floyd  Appreciate that, Deryk.... Typical Floyd Jane... Brilliant!
My first impression matched Herb's. Curt - nice to see you drop by!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
Floyd
Superb writing - wonderful lyrics - catchy tune - sung with conviction.
What more could we need?
Great stuff.
Peter Thanks, Peter... Nice groove and great story. Rock on! Thanks, Sammy...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2006
Posts: 7,258
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Jun 2006
Posts: 7,258 |
Good job Floyd, like the lyrics
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2012
Posts: 8,336
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2012
Posts: 8,336 |
Floyd,
I'm not sure who said it but it goes something like this: The older I get, the smarter my parents are.
My father and I did not have a close relationship ... other than baseball and music. We could talk about either all day and night. But everything else was almost out and out war.
Driving beat, super lyric, vocal to die for ... the complete package. Very impressive, my friend!
Alan
BIAB 2024 Ultra Plus-all StylePaks*Win11*32GB DDR5*Rhyzen 9745x*AT 2035 Mic*Peavey Nashville 112 Amp*Ibanez ART120* Acoustic/Electric/Washburn D200S Acoustic*Stromberg Monterey Jazz Guitar Loops: https://aldavidmusic.wixsite.com/bestmusicloops
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2016
Posts: 338
Journeyman
|
|
Journeyman
Joined: Jun 2016
Posts: 338 |
Winner winner chicken dinner,another masterfull piece of writing and production.whenever your name appears on the showcase I feel like a kid on Christmas morning,cant wait to hear whats on offer.
I love the vocal sound on all your recordings and this one is no excepection.just when im thinking your on a james taylor vibe Bang here comes a springsteen truck to knock me off my feet
thank you for sharing Fj
Os Windows Biab 2018. studio one pro 3 ozone 8 focusrite 214 se electronics Gemini mic
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2015
Posts: 3,028
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: May 2015
Posts: 3,028 |
Hello, floyd
Very powerful tune!
Your vocal is really energy.
RealDrums switching is very cool and splendid.
After listening to this song, I thought I would also like to write a song of "son vs. father" someday on a theme such as the return of a prodigal son.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
You remain the eternal optimist
at least to my ear
just a great mix, it's so good
very strong write as always, strong vocals
this is super storytelling, so glad that you're here to share
your talent and great songs!
those guitars rock!
enjoyed,
Kenny Thanks, Kenny... I'd say the same thing about you - "so glad that you're here to share your talent and great songs!"... Great song Floyd!
It really rocks, very good lyrics.
Captivating from beginning to end!
Rob and Anne-Marie Thanks, y'all...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
Floyd,
Energy pulses through on this, especially on the chorus.Not many singers can really deliver that kind of presence - you are on Springsteen levels here!
I enjoyed the full circle of the story.
Excellent work.
Robert
Thanks, Robert. Been a Springsteen fan from day 1 - got to hear a promo copy of "Greetings From Asbury Park" - and attended one of the first stops on the Born To Run tour (right before the record was released) in a small venue... good memories.. hi Floyd its all been said extremely creative good energy and vocal love it thanks for sharing eric Eric - always appreciate you stopping by....
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 15,318
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 15,318 |
Janice and I were talking about you letting your inner Springsteen out and then we read the reviews and realized that we had been preempted. So what. Let it out!! I have an old friend who would return from Springsteen shows and talk for the next three days about how powerful the energy was. I think you captured it with this song. All the fj signature markers are here: - great write -- nice to hear one about somebody that is satisfied - powerful vocal - an arrangment clearly designed to enhance the lyric - outstanding imagery - pro production What did we leave out? Oh yeah, we much enjoyed it! J&B
Our albums and singles are on Spotify, Apple Music, Amazon Music, YouTube Music, Pandora and more. If interested search on Janice Merritt. Thanks! Our Videos are here on our website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,335
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,335 |
Great write and performance. Pro production as usual. Good use of the two drum sets. Key West was a ghost town two days ago. I gotta run. Work to do. Stay safe. It's gonna be a big un. Tom
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
I got a bit waylaid by some weather... i've got the day god gave me
laughter fills the air
i've got my own opinions
if anyone should care
i've got a family raised on love
tho' nothing's guaranteed
it seems to me i've got it made
what more could i need
WHAT A CHORUS!!! This song is a lesson in the craft of songwriting. It makes a great point that is crystal clear and so eloquently told. AMAZINGLY GOOD Floyd!!
One of my dad's favorite little fables went something like this. When I was 18, my dad knew nothing, and was completely out of it. When I was 21, I realized my dad was a pretty smart guy. I couldn't believe how much he'd learned in only 3 years! Love the song Floyd! Take care. Greg Thanks, Greg. I always appreciate a vote of confidence from you on the songwriting aspects... That's a road we all travel at one time or another, Floyd, but few have said it any better. Wonderful job.
I am a little jealous of the way you always seem to make your vocal seem to set in just the right spot in your recordings. That is a struggle I'm still having. Great job! Thanks, Gary. Often, getting a vocal to sit right on a mix only requires subtle tweaks in the processing... A touch more reverb. Adding an analog delay helps, too. Another aspect that folks sometimes don't realize is how the drums level balances a vocal level. Bass, too. Holy crap, that was fantastic, very, very cool tune, right up my alley. Man that was a punch in the face, none better, and my style too. Congrats on that one WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hey, Steve! Thanks for that. Glad you liked it...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2010
Posts: 671
Journeyman
|
|
Journeyman
Joined: Feb 2010
Posts: 671 |
Glad to see you made it through the storm, my son lives in Westchase just out side of Tampa, haven't heard from him since I think Saturday he went to Orlando with the family in a hotel, I assume cell service is still messed up.
Critter
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
Glad to see you made it through the storm, my son lives in Westchase just out side of Tampa, haven't heard from him since I think Saturday he went to Orlando with the family in a hotel, I assume cell service is still messed up.
Steve - You should surely heard from him soon. Things are returning to "normal" across the area. Though there are still many without power... Cool tune Floyd. Awesome vocal and lyric. Loved the story in the lyric. Very wise words from the dad to the son.. Thanks, Scott... Floyd, as I was listening to another great song from you, it dawned on me what sets you apart from a lot others singer/song writers posting material. You have a tremendous gift for vocal phrasing in your lyrics. Never too much/never too little! Everything always just fits right in the pocket! It's noticed and appreciated! Take care, Torrey Torrey - what a nice thing to note. Thank you...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2010
Posts: 1,987
Expert
|
|
Expert
Joined: Jun 2010
Posts: 1,987 |
Wow, this is good! So many good lines in this one. Very well put together. Nice rocker, with a great message! Just typical Floyd Jane.
Steve
Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2008
Posts: 5,083
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: May 2008
Posts: 5,083 |
Great job all around - vocals, mix, lyrics - as everyone has already said. Kudos FJ! I think this song would also work really well in a traditional country arrangement - not that there's anything wrong with the arrangement you've done - I'm meaning it as a complement on the write. (Plus I wouldn't mind hearing it that way. LOL!)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400 |
Lots of great lyrics in this one. Very well produced as usual and some very nice vocals.
Enjoyed it,
Bob Bob - thanks for stopping in for a listen... Good job Floyd, like the lyrics Thanks, Graham... Floyd,
I'm not sure who said it but it goes something like this: The older I get, the smarter my parents are.
My father and I did not have a close relationship ... other than baseball and music. We could talk about either all day and night. But everything else was almost out and out war.
Driving beat, super lyric, vocal to die for ... the complete package. Very impressive, my friend!
Alan Thanks, Alan. Hope you both are doing well... Winner winner chicken dinner,another masterfull piece of writing and production.whenever your name appears on the showcase I feel like a kid on Christmas morning,cant wait to hear whats on offer.
I love the vocal sound on all your recordings and this one is no excepection.just when im thinking your on a james taylor vibe Bang here comes a springsteen truck to knock me off my feet
thank you for sharing Fj Really appreciate that, Brad...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Apr 2013
Posts: 8,659
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2013
Posts: 8,659 |
LIstened earlier and thought I'd posted a reply --
First class write, production and performance. What more could we need? About the only thing I can think that you may not have covered is a MIDI based song.....
Good stuff here. I think you did a really good job on the vocals on this one.
Charlie
BIAB 2025:RB 2025, Latest builds: Dell Optiplex 7040 Desktop; Windows-10-64 bit, Intel Core i7-6700 3.4GHz CPU and 16 GB Ram Memory.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.
ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Band-in-a-Box 2025 Italian Version is Here!
Cari amici
È stata aggerate la versione in Italiano del programma più amato dagli appassionati di musica, il nostro Band-in-a-Box.
Questo è il link alla nuova versione 2025.
Di seguito i link per scaricare il pacchetti di lingua italiana aggiornati per Band-in-a-Box e RealBand, anche per chi avesse già comprato la nuova versione in inglese.
Band-in-a-Box 2025 - Italiano
RealBand 2025 - Italiano
Band-in-a-Box 2025 French Version is Here!
Bonjour à tous,
Band-in-a-Box® 2025 pour Windows est disponible en Français.
Le téléchargement se fait à partir du site PG Music
Pour ceux qui auraient déjà acheté la version 2025 de Band-in-a-Box (et qui donc ont une version anglaise), il est possible de "franciser" cette version avec les patchs suivants:
BIAB 2025 - francisation
RealBand 2025 - francisation
Voilà, enjoy!
Band-in-a-Box 2025 German Version is Here!
Update Your Band-in-a-Box® 2025 to Build 1128 for Windows Today!
Already using Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 1128 now from our Support Page to enjoy the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.
Stay up to date—get the latest update now!
Update to RealBand® 2025 Build 5 Windows Today!
Already using RealBand® 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 5 now from our Support Page to ensure you have the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.
Get the latest update today!
PowerTracks Pro Audio 2025 for Windows is Here!
PowerTracks Pro Audio 2025 is here! This new version introduces many features, including VST3 support, the ability to load or import a .FLAC file, a reset option for track height in the Tracks window, a taller Timeline on the Notation window toolbar, new freeze buttons in the Tracks window, three toolbar modes (two rows, single row, and none), the improved Select Patch dialog with text-based search and numeric patch display, a new button in the DirectX/VST window to copy an effects group, and more!
First-time packages start at only $49. Already a PowerTracks Pro Audio user? Upgrade for as little as $29!
www.pgmusic.com/powertracks.htm
Video: Summary of the New Band-in-a-Box® App for iOS®
Join Tobin as he takes you on a tour of the new Band-in-a-Box® app for iOS®! Designed for musicians, singer-songwriters, and educators, this powerful tool lets you create, play, and transfer songs effortlessly on your iPhone® or iPad®—anytime, anywhere.
Band-in-a-Box® for iOS® :Summary video.
Check out the forum post for more information.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Forums58
Topics84,065
Posts775,045
Members39,584
| |
Most Online25,754
Jan 24th, 2025
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean