Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Sammy,

A good "I'm-fed-up-with-love" song. I always like a "mid-tempo sad" song - it gets the message across without dragging - you did a good job of that here...

Good instrumentation and a good mix. I think the vocal could use a hair more reverb...

Enjoyed.

floyd


Hi Samuel,

Floyd said what I was gonna say, almost word-for-word. I particularly agreed with him on a little more reverb on the vocal. It would give it a little "air" and allow it it fall in with the instrumentation without getting lost in the music.

These from-the-experienced-heart songs really bring home the music and make it real. Although poignant, the lyric is excellently written. Very, very nice!

Alan


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