Hi Ed

Any decisions made regarding production, should probably be based on the final product you are trying to represent. By that I mean.

1. What are you trying to feature?

Your playing, singing, mixing, or are you going for as close to a a full video production as possible.

2. What are your strengths and weaknesses?
Same basic areas should be considered.

3. Hightlight the strengths and play down the weaknesses.
Watch your video once in the morni and once in the evening daily for two or three days. Somthing will stand out to you that you are really happy with, and also something that you
think should be played down.

The sound is fairly well balanced, the guitar may be a little lound, but you are in a hard square room with what appears to be the little condenser mic on the camera. Thats hard to over come.

Maybe build a backing track to augment your playing, use a stool to sit on, record in a much softer room, use a small mixer if your camera has a mic jack. Run a bigger condenser mic or two + the track mix direct from the mixer to the mic jack on the camera.

Crop in closer so you are shown sitting on a stool, make the room very dark, then use some side lighting about the 1:00 or 2:00 o'clock position in front of you, to seperate you from the white walls in the office.

These are just some suggestions, depending on how involved you want the finished product to be without spending a ton of money.

Rob