Cruizy Janne.
Flows along smoothly and I enjoy your voice.
Also like the melodic progression.
Good version.
Cheers.
Thanks RichMac for your nice words

Glad to hear that my voice wasn't so bad I thought

I felt that the lyrics needed an upward going melody, so the majority of the notes are either same or above the previous note, except for the bridge part.
Janne