Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Peter,

This is excellent!

GREAT use of this lyric - in every aspect. The spoken verse had a "Rod McKuen feel". The chorus worked well after that. The bridge was really well done - the changes there were unexpected and super! Nice outro..

Excellent in every way.

floyd


What he said!

We get the McKeuen feel. Used to read a lot of him back in the day - well Bud did -- Janice was a child smile But then the Knopler feel is there also. The lyric, upon refection, is perfect for the spoken verse and set up the chorus really well.

We agree with Dave that more of the guitar work would've been great.

The spoken word, the lead singing and the harmony all really nails the entire feel of the song and well expresses the lyric.

Excellent

Kudos!!!!!!

J&B

Janice/Bud

Thanks for those encouraging words. Really appreciate them.

Peter